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Re: Daughter of the Light -The Prophecy- (Chptr 1)
Wow this was good! Lucky for you though that I know a little Italian because if didn't I'd be lost. I usually don't read short-fast paced stories because they urk ...
Jul 17, 2008 -
Re: The apocalypse!
I heard about this when I was in school. Really I think its all smoke and mirrors because the world was also predicted to end around World War II but ...
Jul 17, 2008 -
Re: Forbidden Violets
Okay so I'm known for starting a new story when I'm already writing one. I was thinking about writing another book called Obsession instead of Forbidden Violets but then I ...
Jul 17, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
Oooh that hat is so cute! I also like the giant Captain Jack.
Jul 16, 2008 -
Re: Beneath the Opera House - Inside The Phantom's Thorne's head
Wow you seem like a very interesting person oh and welcome to YWS. By the way this short bio is written I can tell you write really well and that ...
Jul 16, 2008 -
Re: The House of Straw
Hey Kylan, Wow this is the first script I've read by you (is this your first?) I liked it, as always. I liked how different Carlos and Smith was even ...
Jul 16, 2008 -
Re: Within these murky depths
Hello and Welcome to YWS!! Your Worst At Its Best Well my worst would be not saying that I did love this. (is that bad enough?) Ok, I must say ...
Jul 11, 2008 -
Re: Forbidden Violets
I just want to say thanks to the people who have commented. Can someone else please give some advice? Thanks, Angel
Jul 11, 2008 -
Re: Heroes Captioned Pics
I love this pic its quite funny. Heroes was one of the best shows and by the way I love your siggy. It would be nice to be in a ...
Jul 11, 2008 -
Re: The Rose
This was good but it needs some help. You start off with a girl who picks a rose but then you go on to a guy revealing his feelings and ...
Jul 11, 2008 -
Re: Removed by Author
Wow this was good. The way you write is not over the top but smooth and free. Your descriptions, especially when the wolves came in was fantastic. Goosebumps were lining ...
Jul 11, 2008 -
Re: You Think You Know Me
This had rhythm and was simply powerful and real. The emotions that you portrayed are ones that millions of people feel. You wrote something that a lot of people can ...
Jul 11, 2008 -
Re: Leaving My Soul
I like the way you write. This was a very dark poem but the creativity made it shine. When you read a poem you should be able to also read ...
Jul 11, 2008 -
Re: Shadow of the Sun, Ch. 4
Again another great chapter. Secrets Revealed By Comatose Lights Well, I am so happy to learn something about Mikhail. You've kept me really curious for a long time, which is ...
Jul 10, 2008 -
Re: A Lively Conversation Between Two Corpses (1)
Ello Sam I was looking for something interesting to read and I have found it. Margot seems like the dark character that everyone loves to love vice versa. She seems ...
Jul 9, 2008
